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Little Monster (Espanol) Pagina 23 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 2 4 Little Monster (Espanol) Pagina 22 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 2 6 Little Monster (Espanol) Pagina 21 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 2 6 Little Monster (Engish) Page 23 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 7 39 Little Monster (English) Page 22 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 2 4 Little Monster (English) Page 21 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 2 2 Dusk Shine in pursuit of Happiness -C7-2 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 4 2 Dusk Shine in pursuit of Happiness -C7-1 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 2 0
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Dusk Shine in pursuit of Happiness -Chapter 7
Chapter 7 - High-speed Pranking!
"So tell me Dusk, would you like to prank some ponies?" Rainbow Dash asked with a sinister smile.
"Eh?" Said Dusk, taken aback by such a question. Pranks? What on earth is this mare thinking!? Dusk thought, standing before the persistent look of the pegasus, decided to answer sensibly. "I... I don’t think that's such a good idea ..."
"Hmph! I knew you'd say no." Rainbow Dash said, turning around with feigned resentment. "I knew you were just a good little boy... I bet you always follow everything your teacher tells you to do when she tells you to, just like a foal."
Rainbow Dash's words hit Dusk right where it hurt. The unicorn on any other occasion would have recognized when someone was trying to manipulate it, but this time, after Rainbow Dash had called him 'effeminate', 'cute little girl' and 'foal' today, he really wanted to prove that he WAS manly and could be a bad boy if he wanted to.
"And what did you have in mind?" Dusk ans
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Dusk Shine in pursuit of Happiness -Chapter 6
Chapter 6 – Wanted
KNOCK-KNOCK!
Dusk Shine awoke to a knock at the door. With a big yawn, he slowly opened his eyes and stretched.
"Hmm?" Dusk murmured, not able to speak properly because of the sleepiness and tiredness he still had.
The barn door began to open, causing the morning sun's rays to strike Dusk's face directly. He narrowed his eyes and tried to see who had opened the door, but the bright sunlight prevented it.
"Good mornin', I hope ya slept well." A mare's voice said.
It was Applejack who, after opening the barn door, leaned on the door frame and stared at Dusk. The unicorn stared back at her, it was as if the mare was waiting for Dusk to say something.
"Eh... Oh, yes! I slept very well, thank you!" Dusk finally replied, understanding that Applejack was waiting for an answer.
"Glad ta hear it!" Applejack smiled. "I was worried y'all slept badly since ya slept in the barn."
"Don't worry, it's much more comfortable than it looks," Dusk said, smiling back. "Also,
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Dusk Shine en busca de la Felicidad -C10-1 :iconbigsnusnu:BigSnusnu 5 13
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Dusk Shine en busca de la Felicidad -Capitulo 10.2
Capítulo 10 – Buscando un príncipe encantador
[Continuación de la primera parte del capítulo 10]
Dusk seguía caminando sin rumbo fijo, solo siguiendo las órdenes de la pequeña potranca en su lomo, quien le iba indicando hacia donde doblar en cada esquina.
“¿Nos llevará mucho llegar hasta donde debes ir?” Preguntó Dusk, mirando de reojo hacia atrás a Sweetie Belle, pues empezaba a sospechar que la potranca solo lo estaba llevando en un camino sin rumbo.
“No, ¡Falta poco!” Respondió Sweetie Belle con una sonrisa y una tierna mirada, haciendo que las dudas de Dusk desaparecieran ante tan inocente cara.
“Por cierto.” Agregó Sweetie Belle. “¿Te gusta leer? ¿O resolver problemas matemáticos? ¿O la historia? ¿Quizás estudias algo?”
Dusk se sorprendió ante la estampida de preguntas que Sweetie Belle hizo ta
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Dusk Shine en busca de la felicidad -Capitulo 10.1
Capítulo 10 – Buscando un príncipe encantador 
[NOTA DEL AUTOR: El capítulo salió de nuevo levemente más largo de lo permitido por deviantart, así que en vez de cortarlo y dejar el capítulo a medias, lo dividí en dos, capítulo 10.1 y 10.2, perdón por las molestias]
Spike miró hacia todos lados mientras sus ojos se abrían con asombro sin poder creer lo que veían, ante él se encontraba un enorme campo multicolor en donde el suelo resplandecía con destellos de distintos colores, algo que a primera vista hubiera parecido un enorme campo lleno de flores brillantes, pero que al poner más atención se podía ver que la enormidad de colores no eran flores ¡sino gemas! rubíes, zafiros, esmeraldas y distintas gemas de variadas formas, tamaños y colores que cubrían todo el campo hasta donde alcanzaba la vista.
“Esto… ¡Esto es el par
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Little Monster (Espanol) Pagina 23
"Destino."

Si comentas, ¡Gracias! =D (Big Grin) eso me motiva a continuar.

**Palabras del autor: Y así es como termina este comic corto, finalmente mostrando la identidad de nuestro 'pequeño monstruo'.
Como propuesta, les recomiendo leer el comic desde el principio ;
)    Primera página
En tanto a cómo nació la idea de este comic, comentar que nunca me gustaron mucho esas ideas de los fanarts o fanfics que mostraban a Celestia y a Luna siendo hijas de la realeza y siendo criadas con todos los lujos que conlleva eso, a mí no me gusta la realeza ni su supuesto origen divino, yo prefiero creer que un rey (o princesa en este caso) debe saber lo que es sufrir y conocer los padecimientos que sufre su pueblo, además recordando que antes que existiera Equestria, las tres tribus estaban separadas y se odiaban, así es como pensé ¿Cómo realmente hubieran reaccionado aquellos ponies prejuiciosos y con odio en sus corazones al ver a una potrilla diferente? Y así nació esta idea, mi visión de Celestia potrilla.
En fin espero les haya gustado y gracias por leer mi comic, pronto más comics ;D

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Little Monster (Engish) Page 23
"Destiny."

Thanks for commenting, it motivate me to continue the story, and thanks for Reading ;) (Wink)

& thanks to PhoenixFlambe  with the translation :) (Smile)

**Author's words: And this is how this short comic end, finally showing the identity of our 'little monster'.
As a proposal, I recommend reading the comic from the beginning ;)    First page
As to how the idea of this comic was born, I thought that I never really liked those ideas of the fanarts or fanfics that showed Celestia and Luna being daughters of the royalty and being raised with all the luxuries that entails that, I don't like royalty or its supposed divine origin, I like to believe that a king (or a princess in this case) must know what it is to suffer and to know the sufferings suffered by his people; also remembering that before there was Equestria, the three tribes were separated and they hated each other, that's how I thought: How would they reacted? ponies with prejudiced and hatred in their hearts when they saw a different pony, at the present time she had been cheerfully received for incarnating the three tribes like one, but thousands of years ago everything was different. And so this idea was born, my vision of Celestia's chilhood.
I hope you liked it and thanks for reading my comic, soon more comics ;D

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Little Monster (English) Page 22
"A ray of sunlight finally shows her face."

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Thanks for commenting, it motivate me to continue the story, and thanks for Reading ;) (Wink)

& thanks to PhenixFlambe  with the translation :) (Smile)

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Sorry for not publishing the pages in English, but who corrects my dialogues in English (Bookrider) still doesn't respond me. I could publish it with the dialogues exactly as I translated them, but I wouldn't like to publish a job with errors (my English may be fine, but I prefer to have someone who speaks native English).
It has been more than a week since I have the pages ready, but I didn't want to wait any longer, so I published the Spanish version.
If someone (who speaks English as a native language) would like to help me, I would appreciate it, becuase it seems that who helps me is busy this week =P
Thank you :)

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:iconntw0926:
ntw0926 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
had a nice christmas?
also... you're alright?
I mean nothing came recently
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BigSnusnu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
oh, yes, I had a nice christmas, thanks for asking :D
and I'm sorry, I know that I haven't published as often as before, but these last 2 weeks I've been very busy :( anyway, I hope to publish two new pages of the comic 'Little Monster' this week :)
thanks for worrying ;)
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ntw0926 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016
it's okay when you're okay.
thxs for commenting evev you're busy
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tecar7 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2016
muy buenas historias, tu nivel de dibujo parece que fuese hecho por lauren faust
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BigSnusnu Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2016
muchas gracias, me alegra que te guste mi trabajo ^^
gracias por comentar =D
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SupanaChuru3000 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Linda Galeria!
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BigSnusnu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2016
muchas gracias =D
te invito a leer mis comics ;)
gracias por comentar :)
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digitalkon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
No sabía que andabas malito de salud, perdona. Incluso empezaba a pensar que habías perdido interes en MLP como paso con jaquelindreamz (la creadora de Eris, r63 de Discord).

Recuperate y nos vemos pronto.
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BigSnusnu Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2016
no te preocupes, si hay algo en lo que soy obsesivo es en terminar lo que empiezo :)

perdón la demora, la verdad con la historia de Dusk esperaba publicar al mismo tiempo la versión en ingles del capítulo 1 con el capítulo 2, supongo que solo esperaré esta semana sino subiré solo la versión en español.
también estoy avanzando en el comic 'little monster' en cuanto tenga las 2 primeras páginas listas las publicaré (he avanzado más lento ya que no es comedia, es drama, y quiero transmitir correctamente las emociones)

 gracias por la preocupación ;)
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ntw0926 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016
I think you're post nothing heere recently.
plz leave a comment if you are here
(I think you must be busy these days.. but I'm worried if you are okay.😨)
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